debatable
No doubt you got a great tone going..good art style to go along with it too. But the moral of this story is depressing for me but thats mainly because im thinking that you and others like you think its a good conclusion. Ok i saw the signs that she was only interested in appearance (the hair thing), shallow (the music choice) and immature (just wanted to go to his house and make-out). But whats sad is that he doesnt lover her anymore because of those things...which makes him even shallower. Or if the flashback section shows the reason, he doesnt want to be with her because he wants to have bigger goals, places to go and feels tied down by her. ...Thats even more pathetic.
That blobby, bald toon fella is as depressing as the music he listens to and until he figures himself out he wont be happy with anything ever.