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[Between part.2 english]

damn thats cool

Looks great, nice fitting music, interesting story, a topless flatchested girl....all things i like.
Only downside is having to take my eyes away from the interesting visuals to read the text.

ALSO...the end and what he says at the end reminds me of Fight Club...may have been the same line.

[Ruff in the Jungle]

looked good an all but...

...it was repetitive, boring, pointless and the music sucked.

[Squaresville]

I dont know Portugese.

That wasnt really funny but it was definitely interesting and original, which compensates for humor more than enough.
Gripes:
Flash Sound Library sounds suck, dont use 'em.
That customer service part with the 3d shelves...the animation of the shelves didnt match up with the background (sticky feet problem).

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[Madness Antipathy]

Great but not the Greatest

Excellent animation and all that, i think you could have optimized better though - my computers on the high end but it still lags a bit when theres lots of bodies (if youre not already you should break up all the clips youre not using anymore in the scene - less clips, less lag).

:meaningless pointless complaints:
- The intro seemed a bit over-poetic for an episode of Madness, a simple "Somewhere in Nevada" would have done the job.
- The Natrual Born Killer glasses didnt look good on him last movie and my opinion hasnt changed on that.
- Why is Hank STILL fighting that stupid clown? He's the only "Boss" he's been fighting for 2 movies now! Seriously throw in Jesus or something new. The new version of the clown looks like something good for next episode but its taken too long for something new.
- Yay for the train, need more interesting stuff like that - im totally over the stalking through buildings.
- Since after Apotheosis Hank has started looking more and more like a monster himself....i really dont see how he can still be a hero....i think its time he won.

[X/ Battle Alpha]

Teh.

Something very, very wrong about this.
Looks ok but its brought down by; the overuse of glow effect, no story or point or anything, a weird cast of wide-ranging popular characters doing random stuff, a crappy (j-pop?) song.

Also its creepy, i donno why...just is.

[Invader Zim: TMHSE]

eh well yeah its umm goooood but ummm it could be

-better.

Its snazzy and all but it could stand to look better...not that it doesnt look good but when youre trying to emulate Invader Zim...Invader Zim is so beautifully animated...you just have to try and get the graphics looking more....ummmm....natrual. You should do atleast one good super-fbf camera twist per episode.....they had lots of those in Invader Zim.
...and the voices need to be.....better-er. They sound similar which is good but there are some parts that sounded like it needed a retake. And the audio quality could be better in general...i recommend file>export movie> and selecting wav format, so you can take the soundtrack and edit it in a sound program to make sure no parts are too quiet.
And most of all....a mor epic story....NEEDS MORE DOOM.

[Truth about Masturbation]

lawlers

coolest. primate. ever.

[Love is Gay]

teeeeeeh.

Spend more time on making visually pleasing animation, get some better voice actors, focus more on the interesting jokes (the bipolar bit was win) and less on the cliche plot and you have something.

[TANKMEN]

This wins.

If only for "I'm gonna be a Dad!" *splatter*.

[Another FLCL Parody]

Wow youre cheap.

Yknow when someone decides to use cheap south park style graphics they usually decide to have it as the animation to a funny and ORIGINAL story.
And when someone decides to use an audio track from something as the basis of their animation its common to give it something special in the graphics....like a visual joke or exquisite animation or something of that sort.
You just took 2 cheap shortcut methods and slapped them together to make something of superior cheapness.

p.s.- South Park style adults shouldnt be short like kids.