Score: 8

"---"

submission: [2008] REBOOT 10

date: April 19, 2008

*suggestions*
-Needs a snappier intro.
-This episode is very long and disjointed. The length is a trend that's been getting larger with each episode for better or worse but theres really only for worse on the disjointed front....the cutting around between stuff is fun and all but in earlier episodes it used to be only cutting between the main story and a single side story of one of the characters. Now you have multiple side stories and multiple threads of the main story going on at once which is very confusing.
-There's alot of unneeded fluff. Besides the obvious "Reboot will be Right back. Reboot is back!" many scenes could be done far shorter and still get the point they want to get across. Minimalism, etc.

PS. MASSACRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111112

Score: 10

"YES! GOD YES! UNGHHHHHHHH!"

submission: CoCkSpLoSiOn

date: April 19, 2008

I take it that collab failed then? I guess i should submit mine too then eh!?

also. AQUARIUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Score: 3

"Not racist enough."

submission: WeRBopBop #8

date: April 12, 2008

This was not racist enough and the stupid characters blinked every second and now im blinking a whole bunch from seeing them blink.

For making me blink...YOU ARE NOW AWARE OF YOUR BREATHING.

Score: 3

"A theft of funny indeed."

submission: A Theft of Funny (TTA)

date: February 24, 2008

Not funny, too many gradients, skunk is yiffbait, no ending.

Score: 1

"god......"

submission: The Truth Is

date: November 28, 2007

that just kept going.....and didnt stop not being funny.
gb2youtube.

Score: 6

"i'm betting 5 bucks on this getting deleted"

submission: [2007] REBOOT 9

date: November 18, 2007

After Load Animation,Pre-"Pre-Menu-Robot"-Quote, Pre-Menu robot,Menu,pointless music video style intro, credits, mid-animation (non-existant-)advertisement bumps, more credits,pr-re-menu animation.
It's really more like 11 minutes of animation with another 7 minutes of fluff.

The music choices didnt work out well this time around....and wtf is with Smite pulling a WHEN I WAS! Horrific.

The voice acting was too low in the mix to hear what they were saying often and alot of the voice acting from what i could make out lacked the appropriate emotion and/or timing of the scene.

The graphics were far too often funny...funny because they looked retarded....blob arms, one eye bigger than another or looking off in another direction, etc.

Story wise not much happened....a whole lot of buildup on the core storyline without any payoff while you waste alot of time doing mario fanservice. Yeah it was cool in Reboot 7 but thats because it was an interesting representation of Smite fucking up the computer, deleting stuff. It's been 2 episodes.....shouldnt he be on to other files by now? Was there a point to Luigi being tied up strapped with a bomb other than trying to make mario fanbois cream their pants?

All and all i'd like to see you strip back the nonsense so you can get back to the story......the yellow kid still hasnt done anything since he was introduced....besides say "wtf" alot.

Also i'd like my name off the credits.

Score: 7

"cute"

submission: Hbd Victoria!

date: November 12, 2007

That was cute. A nice story with a beginning middle and end (something rare on newgrounds). The character animation was a bit lacking due to the tweening and i feel it couldve used some sound effects.... but youre clearly gonna get laid for making it so my score probably doesnt matter to you.

As for converting to video... camtasia is pretty simple to use. Other than that you could just switch your movieclips to graphic clips (would have to lose the filters) and export it from flash.

Score: 7

"smallpox + blankets"

submission: Kite Plight

date: September 25, 2007

Extremely well animated... but i also found it incredibly boring.
Also i didnt feel the music mixed well with the animation.
Not great entertainment but im sure it will look great in your resume.

On top of that.....it looks like it was made in flash.....if so, why did you convert it to video? Youve only raised the filesize and lowered the quality.

Score: 9

"u win k?"

submission: Happiness Apotheosis

date: September 23, 2007

c^_____________________^3 |\/|

Score: 8

"words for the part no one reads"

submission: how many licks

date: August 22, 2007

I have the swfs of roughs to prove you gave up!
YOURE A BIG QUITTER!
HAY EVERYONE THIS GUY IS A BIG QUITTER!